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my warden is a dear and i borrowed the idea of DeArs the anami that i do not own
Dears-rightful owners
zev-biowear
my warden- me
for my sisters 31st
by the way if anythings wrong dont worry and sorry... im still learning english
love ya all and feel free to comment
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okay here are the mistakes i found hunny nd what they should be but otherwise apart from spelling its good 

minuets witch-minutes which
bolder-boulder
coller-collar
starten-started
untieing-untying
lase-lace
reveailing-revealing
swolen-swollen
bacame-became
manover-manuver
toungh-tongue
 trough -through
pressuar-pressure
adrenallin-adrenilin
 litrualy -literally
stoped-stopped
swolon-swollen
hoverd-hovered
increes-increase
isnside-inside
plesuar-pleasure
squerting,-squirting
satisfide-satisfied
witch-which
ungreatful -ungrateful
dimond-diamond